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Young poets, essayists, and teachers of poetry
review debut and second collections


 
Jennifer Chang
Joanna Goodman, Trace of One
University of Iowa Press, 2002, 66pp, $13

The poems in Joanna Goodman's Trace of One hover between the physical and spiritual worlds. They are poems of hectic grace, busy converting one matter into another, transforming identity and space, and bridging distances while discovering new ones. Goodman often uses the second person to join the lyric "I" and the reader, so that even the story of inconstancy is one we all share. This is perhaps the reconciliation behind the poet's insistent ruminating. Whether the end is physical or spiritual, it is the traveling, not the arriving, that propels these poems: "the moment before we turn / to stone leaves us most deeply, most / blazingly ajar—." And what propels a reader through Trace of One is the affecting confidence with which Goodman interrogates mystery—not the least of which is relationship, which she regards with careful awe. Here we have a poet of luminous observation, sharing a voice both vulnerable and daring in its humanity: "I need some help / to brave this fool's ship, it's off-course, / bungled in the unseen worlds that echo and dunk and rise / like marionettes dropped from the hieratic stars." A startling first collection.


 
Joshua Beckman
Geoffrey G. O'Brien, The Guns and Flags Project
University of California Press, 2002, 85 pp, $16.95
For years it's over and then it really begins, a clear flame flickers in the heart of each thing but it is the same one, cool to the touch and those who walk about are as little jars the grayness of the sky gave rise to, the trees painted wildly enough they are not to be noticed for more than a central flame, the song that survives its chorus only to leave off being, wherein a peasant feeling that the soil travels toward other colors. Thus the truth was passed like a rifle leaned against a window.
The poems in Geoffrey G. O'Brien's first book present a compelling mix of visual landscape and philosophical inquiry. Rigorously constructed, they attempt the investigation of ideas through a somewhat jarring accumulation of images. Drawing on an uncomfortable simultaneity of intuitive and intellectual knowledge, these poems constantly circle around themselves and their moment of inspiration. Their density is engaging, and with a purposeful complex language that seems of another era, they are a pleasure to read. In The Guns and Flags Project, O'Brien prioritizes observation over voice. His objective tone creates a distance between the writer, the subject, and the reader, one in which even the most emotive moments express a somewhat historical sensibility. In a time when so many poets are doing the very opposite, this distance is a welcome path toward both emotional and intellectual clarity.


 
Matthea Harvey
Rebecca Wolff, Manderle
University of Illinois Press, 2001, 72pp, $12.95

Rebecca Wolff's first collection of poems takes the name of the house in Daphne de Maurier's novel, Rebecca. When the novel begins, Rebecca is already dead and the house holds only the memory of its former mistress. Are we supposed to conclude that Rebeccas haunt Manderleys? Wolff is certainly a spectral presence in her own book—and even we, as readers, haunt, but never fully inhabit the "I" of these poems, which touch down on the real only to bounce back into abstraction. This leap comes in a number of forms—sometimes through such music as "rhododendrons not in flower / but in redundancy," sometimes through the pogo-sticking of simile and metaphor: "lobsters crawl onto the succoring shore like cockroaches / tasting sugar on a counterculture, giant / instruments of cold salience." Wolff's speakers are often flustered flaneuses with minds that dash far ahead of their feet: "Walking: my theorem runs." When, on the other hand, the poems do inhabit the physical world, they choose the most intimate of subjects (though they do signal an ironic distance through their titles). There is "The Proverbial Handshake: The Sharon Olds Poem," in which the speaker discusses the way her cervix clenches her lover's penis after sex, or "Mom gets laid," which describes just that. Wolff has an Ashberian talent for titles—one favorite is "Don't know what to call him but he's mighty lak a rose," a poem in which Wolff plays tone like a xylophone, sliding swiftly between registers. I thank this book for its thinking. Wolff writes, "I have fun with you in the mental landscape" and we do.


 
Jeffrey Shotts
Miranda Field, Swallow
Houghton Mifflin Company/Mariner Books, 2002, 53pp, $12

"Everything survives / the story of its fall," Miranda Field writes, and in her voluptuous debut collection, Swallow, she coaxes both the story and the survival out of an Eden-like language, like meaning—intent on staying private, exclusive, hidden, "The point of entry is a locked box in a drawer, / a locket lying in the box." The effect is an ever-opening eye, the senses slowly coming to, enrapt by charged atmospheres— quixotic orchards or the time-stopped climates at the Museum of Natural History. The hesitant accrual of her lines breaks open into brutally revealing admissions as in: "The midwife held him up, / his huge head hungry on its stem: too big, too old, too slow, / then sudden: a son. Not the girl I wanted. The boy slit me." The lush music at work in these poems, in the diction of both splendid brocade and unkempt wilderness, masterfully registers the poet's genuine desire for ecstatic truth and the hard-earned revelation that it only comes gradually.
As Field writes in "Affliction Is a Marvel of Divine Technique," "Sometimes a shattered thing / gains value." This is urgent and startlingly honest in the context of Field's proffered treasures—polished lockets, overripe pears, wine presses, perfumes, silver spoons—an ephemeral past spread out before us, the consequences of excess that are difficult, indeed, to swallow.